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the main character of my novel Haseo Yashimora
this art is not mine it was a point commission i payed from- chiikajr.deviantart.com/
and yes i got permission to post this in my gallery.
this art is not mine it was a point commission i payed from- chiikajr.deviantart.com/
and yes i got permission to post this in my gallery.
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Well the story itself is great, but you overdo the abilities, if your opponents are stronger I don't see how your guy is as powerful as he is right now. Even if he a demigod or something like that he's only so powerful. No matter how strong one man is he's just one man and there will always be someone who is stronger. I think you need to add in a time where he doubts himself and trains. Nevertheless it's a good story so far it's just the abundant of abilities and powers you give, it would only seem fair to have your enemies with similar things.