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Haseo Yashimora Final by HaseoYashimora Haseo Yashimora Final by HaseoYashimora
the main character of my novel Haseo Yashimora


this art is not mine it was a point commission i payed from- chiikajr.deviantart.com/


and yes i got permission to post this in my gallery.
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A very nice rendition of the character, an amalgamation of several anime influences. The movement seems swift but deliberate, the line work is fine with some nice details like the armored sleeve under the traditional cloak. To be honest I would have preferred to see something with more color to give this powerful being more presence. The original artist has done a nice job with this as it appears to only be like a simple sketch or concept art to show how the character should look and perhaps a more detailed rendition can be posted in future, perhaps even some of the other characters in the book as well.
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Well the story itself is great, but you overdo the abilities, if your opponents are stronger I don't see how your guy is as powerful as he is right now. Even if he a demigod or something like that he's only so powerful. No matter how strong one man is he's just one man and there will always be someone who is stronger. I think you need to add in a time where he doubts himself and trains. Nevertheless it's a good story so far it's just the abundant of abilities and powers you give, it would only seem fair to have your enemies with similar things.
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Cool :)
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ty
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:iconjacob-cross:
Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
Np
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:iconflameleaf1347:
FlameLeaf1347 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG so freaking epic *-*
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ty the artiest i payed this for is really good look at bottom of description 
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
UPDATE: Teacher: Futsunushi: the god of swords and lightning
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:iconarchon89:
Archon89 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Looks like a very interesting character! :)
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ty very much
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Archon89 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
You're welcome
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blazingzakurai Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
so cool :S better then mine lol need to draw more xD
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:b more u draw better u get, but ur going good so far ;)
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MeyYukari Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AWESOME :iconyeashplz: :iconhesmileplz:
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HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ty very much
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
500 VIEWS TY SO MUCH GUYS!
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
UPDATE

chapter 2 is done
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RetniBewre Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I like it and his desing =D

And It is surprising for me and overcoat I love that There are much information about the oc =D I like that this is so complete <3 And in this case it is very interesting :la:
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HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ty very much
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HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
UPDATE!!! new ability and power, offical dates to CH 2 and 3 coming out
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hikaru-chan649 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
SO much backstory :0 makes this character more and more interesting. Very well drawn, too!
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ty
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:iconhikaru-chan649:
hikaru-chan649 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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missgendaispeaker Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
amazing!!!!!
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ty
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:iconmegansora:
MeganSora Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ty
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:iconmegansora:
MeganSora Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome
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AngelicMoonSushi Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is really good :O
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ty very much
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Fantasy34 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice job I like it a lot
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ty
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:iconalpha-element:
Alpha-Element Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very cool!:D
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ty, also can you summit your art in AFOPnetwork please?
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Alpha-Element Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i am, don't worry!:) and your welcome!:D
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Alpha-Element Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i am, don't worry!:) and your welcome!:D
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:iconomega-killer:
Omega-Killer Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student Writer
you can't be 5'12", that's 6'
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
?_? fixed
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:iconomega-killer:
Omega-Killer Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student Writer
HA!
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:iconhaseoyashimora:
HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:b
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yessica13 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
cool :3
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HaseoYashimora Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
~^^~
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